Introduction: What is success?

Success Criteria:

• Title, Introduction, Explanation Sequence, Conclusion
• Action Verbs
• Present tense: is, now.
• Time connectives: first, secondly, finally, then, when
• Vocabulary: technical language

Introduction: What is success?

Different kinds of success

People who have had success - my uncle: what, how, why? what helped him be successful.

Brother - NSW cup

conclusion:

How can you be successful?

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what is success

success is when you do something in your life get a good job and earn money for your family

that is success there is many ways to have success in life

different kinds of success

success is made in many ways you could have success being an accountant and earn money for your wife and kids so you can have a good life or you could have an ok job like a builder and ok money and still have a good life but  not being as rich and it is not all about being rich as long as you are happy you are successful  you can be as you want to be t\hen there is a bad job the bad job is a rubbish truck job you earn about 12$ a week and that is not fun and won't have enough money

people who have had success

My Uncle

many people have done some amazing things in there life things that they thought they never could do but they did. My uncle has recently just done an iron man in taupo  and never stopped because he said he wouldn't stop . any way he also has done three half iron men and also has done one marathon and five half marathons he is one of most successful guy i know. my uncle

is a great fisher man two he won the biggest marlin award he caught it under the harbour bridge he has been really

People who have had success

my brother has been training for years to make his goal all of my family is proud of him he has just won a premiership and now he made his goal is to make it to the nrl at the moment his goal is nearly accomplished. he has trained very hard to make his nsw cup debut he has been in the under 20s holden cup , bundi cup and now has made his destination to the nsw cup for this year his goal for next year is hoping to be in the nrl his dream always was to play professional rugby  league in the nrl his dream was to be a vodafone warrior now i want copy him and train as i can to be a famous rugby league star like my brother.