Intention: I wanted the person to feel exited and scared. Writing focus: Add detail and emotion.

I can feel my heartbeat beating as strong as an elephant walking. I'm totally motionless, I froze and can’t move out of all of the spikes in my stomach. I feel terribly frightened, but still feel like sun is going in my eyes and making me feel happy for it.  My eyes are filled with fear, but I am still like a little ant in big world jumping and playing around.  I'm in a pit of thoughts. I'm feeling really blue and my face is red. I'm a bit frightened but still excited, I'm feeling really nervous and confused. Watching colours on other peoples expressions. Just imagining what’s going to happen next at the door to building knowledge.