Monday 28 July 2014

Intention: I wanted the reader to feel amazed and relaxed. Writing focus: To Control my sentences so they are short and long and I can make my writing


I am strongly stuffing my Mouth with immense flavour while a miraculously odd and enjoyable feeling in spirits makes my feelings all joyful. My belly is amazingly following the blissful taste of paradise. I feel like simply wishing at a well that I can feel that amazing feeling again. I felt like I tasted a cloud. Touching my taste buds , is a soft and sweet taste. The brown icing making my mouth feel like chocolate.  Everything around me seemed to be in a half mist while I try imagining what could this magic possibly be

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